Descriptive Reflection - Formal Introductory Letter
Subject: Self-Introduction Letter Dear Professor Blackstone, I am writing this letter with the purpose of formally introducing myself and providing more context on who I am as a person. In 2021, I graduated from Singapore Polytechnic (SP) with a diploma in Mechanical Engineering. My interest in the engineering field has been an intrinsic part of me for as long as I can remember. I have always been fascinated with how the world around me works, and have been down many “rabbit holes” from even the simplest questions. My father also played a part in this, due to his job as an aircraft engine technician at the time and his attitude of “everything is fixable” that he showed to many things around the house. Upon reflection, I feel that my communication strength is empathy. During conversations, I try to make it a point to really think about what I am going to say and how it might affect the other person. As an introvert, my biggest communication weakness is public speaking. Paired with a sli...
Hi Ewan, While there's nothing inherently weak with the contents of the pitch, an average delivery that has no looks, coupled with an average production, lowers the score on an otherwise convincing idea.
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